Re: [documentliberation-discuss] Improving the Document Liberation Project website

Hi David,

Thanks for your feedback -- I've incorporated those changes (and a 
Twitter link) to the front page here: http://www.documentliberation.org

Any other feedback welcome! If someone who has access to @docliberation 
can tweet about it ("We've revamped our front page..." or similar), I 
can retweet from @libreoffice as well to keep spreading the word.

Mike


On 30.05.2016 17:23, David Tardon wrote:
> Hi,
>
> On Mon, May 23, 2016 at 04:58:07PM +0200, Mike Saunders wrote:
> > Here's an idea for a simplified version of the DLP front page, as 
> > discussed
> > with David. It takes the core info but makes it snappier and straight 
> > to the
> > point, directing readers at other pages if they want to explore 
> > further. All
> > feedback welcome -- if nobody has any objections I could put it online 
> > next
> > week.
>
> I like it, but I would make a few small corrections...
>
> > Many computer users today have digital content created years ago and 
> > stored
> > in old, outdated and proprietary file formats. Frequently, these old 
> > files
>
> I would use "document formats" instead of "file formats", as that is
> what we are primarily interested in (as opposed to audio, video, data
> dumps from the Apollo program etc.)
>
> > Many well-known free and open source software applications use 
> > Document
>
> I guess 5-6 can be called "many", but I would prefer to use "various" 
> or
> similar vague term. Note that there is also at least one closed source
> application (a CorelDRAW viewer for OS X).
>
> > Join us: read more [about the Document Liberation Project], check out 
> > the
> > [list of projects] we're working on, and [contribute] code to existing
>
> I think "or" should be used here instead of "and".
>
> > libraries (or create a new one).
>
> I would prefer to change the last clause to something like "... or
> learn how you can contribute to the effort." There are more ways to
> contribute than by writing code.
>
> I also think there should be a clause about social networks.
>
> D.

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